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Old 06-04-2007   #1
Alex Hdez.
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hello every body here is anew pic, i made in 3ds max 9 with vray.(model and render)
please try to be strong with your critiques, thank you.
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Old 06-04-2007   #2
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Hey Alex,

I think it looks awesome. There isn't much that I can see other than that the table looks a little too glassy. It just seems to have really crisp relfections. But that is just a matter of personal preference depending on what kinda table it is and how finished the wood is. Great job.

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Old 06-04-2007   #3
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ok, thank you for your feedback Aaron!!!!!!, i will take a look to the table.

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Old 07-02-2007   #4
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good work...but for the reflection ,i think its a really hight amount..other wise the lighter is not reflective enough...good luck .
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this is nice, but try to blur your reflection and you will see a big difference.

keep up the goods
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Old 08-20-2007   #6
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Hi Alex... love the picture - not sure if i have the right to comment as i am a noobie but ... i would just like to comment about the shadow under the glasses... the shadow under the lighter/box is quite dark, as is the shadow under the saucer but there is hardly any shadow under the glasses - they seem to be floating a bit!

Also the liquid in the cup is rather bland and non-distinct. I really hate to comment because i couldnt produce that picture but you did ask for blunt comments

Hi to all... Love the website/free tutorials and this forum.

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