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Old 05-09-2007   #1
alesspunk
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Join Date: May 2007
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Default My first cityscape!

Hi i want to share my work..i m new in this forum and really gnomon workshop is being a good inspiration.


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http://www.granjasanjudastadeo.net/r...ct1879qi42.jpg



See ya!
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Old 05-09-2007   #2
gkjeane
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Default Nice Job

I like this piece, but I believe it could use of few minor adjustments. For example, the glow on all your lights are seemingly the same brightness, which tends to flatten out your piece. What I mean by that is that the glow on the far away lights should not be the same as bright as the ones closest to you. I just get the feel that the lights in fog would not show as bright. I enjoy the landscape and everything else, though. I just wish there were less lights. Just my personal opinion.
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Old 09-13-2007   #3
JasonRoll
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Default not bad

Pretty good job for your first one The sky is too saturated, it really takes away from the foreground. Study some atmospheric perspective to get some good examples. Good luck
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