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Old 04-18-2007   #1
nomo81
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Default only a test animation


check this out

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Nacho


http://www.artlantis.com/support/for...al_us&mes=6938
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Old 04-18-2007   #2
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The models are pretty cool. It will be interesting to see where you take this.
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Old 05-03-2007   #3
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Wowow nacho!

You have got some cool stuff going on.

My only crit so far base on what i have seen is on the animation of the space craft with the sudden burst acension.

I felt that the pace should be slow - slow - slow until towards the end when the the craft is going to take off then the pace will go fast. It feels abit abrupt now. Either that or you can slow down the 'sudden burst' by a lil and ease out the animation before it comes to a halt.

I will definitely love to see more! Bring it on.

Just some suggestion.
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Old 05-04-2007   #4
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The models look good, yet as mentioned before the motion of the craft needs to slow down.

What I can suggest is allow the crafts to bank with the direction when turning. Also a bit of swaying will make the movement more believable.

Hope this helps with your project!
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Old 05-28-2007   #5
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the models looked good from its starting distance, so my suggestion would be not to make it fly towards the camera but maybe away instead...

-rj
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