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Old 02-15-2007   #1
JL. Alfaro
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Here are some of my works, some I like most need improving but Im sharing it anyways.


From a CA Tdome challenge


Girls calendar challenge


Same challenge
(wip)


Chow


Monthly challenge "The Tunnel"


Personal project





Thanks for looking!

-JL
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Old 02-17-2007   #2
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good start. You need to tighten the skin tones on the bodies. Also the tones are reading really muddy right now. You need a stronger light source and some darker shadows. Keep going!

That last piece is step in the right direction, just watch the anatomy.

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