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Old 12-27-2006   #1
Iva
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Default Need critique

Have done it a while ago, i've used 3dsmax for modeling and lit it with photoshop burntools...
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Old 12-27-2006   #2
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Hi

The Modeling Is Simple But I Like Your Rendrer, We Don't See The 3d, Good Job: (just a small problem whith te bump on the flore, may be you should up the resolution of your bump map or the texture if there is no bump)

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Old 12-29-2006   #3
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Looks more 2D than 3D. You might want to try and light it up with the lights established in the 3d program that you are using. You will get better results as far as making it appear 3d. Good start.
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