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Old 07-21-2009   #1
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Default Rage_ 300 Spartans

As I was doing the model, I realized that it reminded me of the film, 300. So I've gone with it... the base mesh is the free one from the gnomonworkshop



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Old 07-28-2009   #2
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One more update, still needs allot of touching up, but suggestions are welcome

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there are some great wips this month, thanks to those that have done them, heres my update:
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Hi, I can think of one element that may make your piece more dynamic.. it's to do with the centre of gravity of your character. As he's only on one leg his body would be shifted over to accommodate this weight shift ie...



Perhaps have his left foot firmly planted, showing weight, as from the side shots he looks like he may be tripping over?

Also have a look at you sculpt in silhouette to check for some nice angles/poses.. I reckon if he was pointing his sword forward rather than back, it'd give a nice line from his arm...

Apologies if you've already considered the above! Just my opinion of course

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Thanks mkyboy, the help was really appreciated




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Good work, Pharion. The change in the pose has surely improved it.
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