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Old 04-20-2009   #1
Wicked
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Default Feedback needed for 2D draw (landscape)

Hello people, for entering a college (3D art) I need to make some drawings.

1 of them is a landscape, for this I made this as you can see in my post.
I would like to get some critic. Do i need to change allot? for me its seems good enough but thats because its my own work. Would like to hear from other artist what they think about it so I can improve myself!

I scan the image from my dummy (I hope the quality is good enough).


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Hi Wicked,
it seems very good!
One thing: the tree on the right is quite too big. Try to thicken the outline of the right rock and tree to create depth (first plan: large outline, background: light outline). Same thing on the grass on the left. Good job!
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