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Old 03-09-2009   #1
fatalerror
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Default 50's style diner WIP



I just started this a few days ago, still lots to do on it.
Lots of little stuff to add now, and tweaks to the lighting ect..
I'm going to put the menu where the coffee sign is now.
need to model a milkshake machine to.

C&C welcome.
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Old 03-09-2009   #2
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Hi there!

Well, I like the idea and that's a real good start, too, but the overall image looks kinda confusing. There's too many bright and sparkly things there that atract the eye. I think it'd be a nice idea to pull down the brightness a little bit and play more with the lighting. Put up some bright red neons and some lamps and you should get some really nice reflections on all of those chrome parts.

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Alex
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