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Old 12-26-2008   #1
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trying to go for a Fortified wall look in pic still trying to think what else i should add (still trying to get textures to look right tho lol)



tho im also thinking of a 2nt way of the wall, a Dark Forest and a green field meeting and the dark forest having few eyes peering out of the darkness. tho having hard time thinking of how to do it lol still kinda new to 3d which concept do you guys think sound the best for the wall.
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Old 12-26-2008   #2
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Old 12-27-2008   #3
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This looks pretty good. I'm not entirely sure which concept you should use...

One thing that is really poking out at me though is where the focal point is. I can't seem to find what you're object of importance is. The lights also push my eyes away from that general area, so I can't really process what's going on in that area. Perhaps dim down the lights and figure out where your focal point is.

Best of luck.

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Old 12-28-2008   #4
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ty for the reply ill try to make a focal point.and add some more look to the pic.
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Old 12-28-2008   #5
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worked on it a bit more. tho still trying to think of something to add to the grass. and still needs something more at the center, how do you guys think the fog looks?

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