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Old 12-18-2008   #1
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Well this is more like Walls, walls that keep us trapped inside, safe from the world around us, and from ourselves.
Whether you imagine this is in your head, a dark corner in your mind feeling lost and alone, or that this is a reality, it's all up to you and how you see this.
For now this is "finished", but I still have some time left so I thought I'd see if I could get some critiques before I submitted it, there's always something that could use changed, I'll just have to let it rest a few days and come back to it.
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Old 12-18-2008   #2
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Looks nice, definitely tells a story. Perhaps more light away from the character to create a focal "dark spot" on him would look good? I've got nothing to say other than that, nice image.

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Thanks for the reply funddevi, that's something I wanted to have but I wasn't sure how dark it was now (my monitor always seems to be lighter than others), but I'll add more light to the edges and maybe darken up the center.

Thanks again.

Edit:
Here's an updated version, to me the outside looks a little too bright, but let me know what you all think, it may be because I've been staring at it too long


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Old 12-19-2008   #4
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looks too light for me... nothing of an horror scene since its white with a black spot in the middle
I prefer the first one by far
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I'd have to agree with you there, here's a 3rd version, petty much like the first but a little darker/more contrast in the center.
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Yeah, that's exactly what I was thinking with the focal dark spot thing.

Nice work, I think it's ready to submit!

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Old 12-20-2008   #7
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Thanks everyone, the help was much appreciated, I going to go ahead and submit the latest version, if anyone has any other crits of course feel free to let me know, I still have time to edit it, I just want to make sure I get it submitted before the end of the month, with Christmas on its way I'm not sure if I'll have too much free time.
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