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Old 12-18-2008   #1
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Default The Wall Contest Horrorscene like Doom or Silenthill

Hey guys hope you like my new idea about the wall I am not finished yet. Textures are still missing and some effects like steam fire and blood. Still doing modeling work and hope I ll be finished till the end of the year. I think I will post 2 ideas The first is more like Silenthill and the second more like Doom. I am not that good but I give my best

Good luck to you guys aswell

Critics are welcome Thanks in advance
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Old 12-18-2008   #2
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Default Help in my decision

Sorry guys but I am little in trouble it seams I have to work on the x mas holidays.
So I only find time to make one theme. So what do you like more Silenthill Theme or the Doom Theme? Help
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Old 12-18-2008   #3
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hey man this is pretty sweet. id like to see this image finished! whats the other image your talking about?
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Old 12-19-2008   #4
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New update
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Old 12-19-2008   #5
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looks like doom I think

and... just an idea... maybe putting a light at the end of wires that is just floating and barely lighting the scene (with particles of light going out to make it look broken)

I really like your work
make him an angry face and find a way to have a little bit of light on it
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Old 12-19-2008   #6
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Looks good! Perhaps more variation in the color scheme would be good, everything blends together quite a bit.

Keep the images comin'!

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Old 12-20-2008   #7
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Is this the doom or the silent hill version? Used to play Doom and Doom2 in my youth. Silent hill somewhat passed me unnoticed. The creature reminds me a little of hellboy, just without the horns. So that does not perfectly support this kinda incarnation of evil impression.

I donít really get what light source you have at the ceiling. Should be a lamp, but I donít really see the lamp itself. And why is there only one lamp at the end of the corridor? Wouldnít it be nice to have several halogens lining up or at least one more? Then youíd be able to see more detail. So I definitely agree with the more light on the face issue that was recommended before.
The second light, that comes from the air conditioning thingy is daylight?

Iím not sure if I got that correct because of the few light, but there seems to be a lot of wall parts around and compared to the hole there might be too much of them. Less huge wall parts and some nice dust instead would be nice.
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Old 12-30-2008   #8
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Default Final Version

So guys after some trys I make finaly my final version for this contest "The wall"
I hope you guys like my idea thanks Alvarez for this great theme it was a lot of fun makin the wall entry. Good luck to everybody and happy new year's eve
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Old 12-30-2008   #9
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Thanks Andreas for your advices helps me alot sorry that I write so late back but I have worked over x-mas hope you like my new entry and happy new year
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Old 01-02-2009   #10
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Default ok update for my scene

update for the wall
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