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Old 11-07-2006   #1
acetasoski
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Hi.This is my first upload here.I would like to read your coments.The modeling for this one is done in maya, rendering in mental ray and the backround in terragen.I hope you like it.
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Old 11-15-2006   #2
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Not bad. The only thing that stands out to me is that the shadows underneath the car are completely black. You should either adjust the shadow in Maya, or even better, render a few versions of your scene. Do a shadow pass, diffuse pass, reflection pass, and a background pass. Then you'll be able to adjust all these things independently of each other and it'll be much quicker to tweak stuff.
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Old 11-23-2006   #3
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Thanks for the advice.I'am exploring multi pass rendering right now. We're now working on the scene with this car, and that will be the workflow that we'll use. As soon as it's done i will upload it here.
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