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Portfolio Review Share your work for constructive criticism from us and the community

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Old 04-21-2008   #1
Anuradha
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Smile What do you think of my rendering?

hi guys i did this rendering of the model "the local train" done by Alvaro Luna Bautista.
so here it is what do you think.
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Old 04-25-2008   #2
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i like it, nice . i think it has the look of a model train set , more than a totally real train look , i cant say why this is.
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Old 04-25-2008   #3
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i agree with fatal error buty the thing might be cuz the atmosphere is too 3D so it looks tonny and more like bob the constructer than a real train would look like...

personal opinion

but still nice train model
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Old 04-26-2008   #4
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I'd use a more subtle approach to depth-of-field.

About 1/3 into the picture (measured from the bottom) there seems to be some rather harsh break from blurry to sharp, clearly visible with the gravel around the rails.
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Old 05-02-2008   #5
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Thumbs up Nice

I Think it's nice, specially rendering, it's giving a true toon image
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Old 05-17-2008   #6
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