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Old 02-22-2008   #1
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Hi all,

This is my first interior using vray, Just hoping for some critiques and criticism about the image. There is something about the background and lighting that doesn't seem natural to me...though i cant put my finger on it. any comments are greatly appreciated
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Old 02-24-2008   #2
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I just think its the red flower pot outside the window seem to pop out, maybe you can blur it a little on the outside using photoshop. I love the touch of wine bottle, maybe you should put a couple more with it. But I'm thinking that might be a reall really expensive wine
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Old 02-25-2008   #3
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i think maybe the effect of the glass on the windows and door require a little more detail maybe a kind of refraction on the marks... besides that its pretty well done congrats nice work
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Old 02-26-2008   #4
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thanks guys,
i actually never render the scene with glass in the windows and doors because i was just gona photoshop the back ground :P

but that is defiantly what has been looking really strange to me, that i could figure out.

that defiantly help me out

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