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Old 02-18-2008   #1
paveluniversal
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Hello everybody, here I leave my last job ...

I hope constructive criticism ...

Greetings to all ...

Software used: 3dsmax 9, vray 1.5 sp1, Onyx Tree, Vue 6 xStream, Fusion 5.2...

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Old 02-24-2008   #2
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I think the building design is just too simple, kinda feels like a primitive
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Old 02-26-2008   #3
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It looks really good,
but i think it can use some more compositioning stuff since there is so much open space surrounding the house. Just a thought, but what about a broken wagon or something in the fore ground to lead are eye. maybe some more stuff surrounding the house, so we get a sense of the time? like a outhouse or farming equipment.
anyways good stuff
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