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Old 02-08-2008   #1
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Hi all ! Need advices,crits or comments on how this work is going on and which version do you prefer:

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Old 03-13-2008   #2
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Great work man, i appreciate you.
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Old 04-03-2008   #3
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I prefer version 3.
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Old 04-03-2008   #4
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nice work

One and four are both nice. They have the most interesting negative space. I think the perfectly horizontal ships are a bit static though, They really compete with the perspective lines of your composition.
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Old 04-07-2008   #5
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Hey, they both look great but I would say number 1 is the best. I think the one point perspective gives it more direction than number 3. Number 3 seems to get a little mixed up and lost. Stick with what you got going on in Number 1 but try to add something that gives it a focal point. It needs something that will draw our eye. Keep it up. Looks good.
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Old 04-08-2008   #6
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can't see # 2.

As far as which one's the best, that depends on the result you're trying to achieve and what message you're trying to get across.
If you want to portray a more industrial skyport, number 1 is the best. If you're going for a mysterious city of an ancient civilization, I'd say number 4 is the best. If you want a ancient spaceport on a planet at the edge of the galaxy, number 3 is the best. I don't like any one better than the others. They are all telling different stories, so it really just depends on what you're trying to illustrate.

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Old 06-08-2008   #7
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i woulld say the last one if you get rid of the 'bird flocks' the other to me have 'too many lines' when i say lines the composition has horivontal movement up top, diagnal movement on the bottom and vertical movement on the sides... this make for no part to be of interest
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