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Old 11-27-2007   #1
Gilban
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Smile Mosque in U A E,Dubai

Duds..
Please....always welcome for C&C
MAX,V RAY AND PHOTOSHOP
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Old 12-08-2007   #2
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Default Nice work

How did you get the skies so goodlooking?
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Old 12-08-2007   #3
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Hay Giban,
Your building looks great, the texture on it is good. I like the second one a lot better than the first one, but remember if the sun is setting behind the building the original shadows from your first render need to be compensated as well, to match the setting sun. The palm trees and birds definably give it some life. Other than the shadows the only thing that looks a bit off is the color of the stones for the street and the amount of blur you used seems a bit strong. Fantastic model though, hope that helps
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Old 12-09-2007   #4
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Hi ....head_smell
Thanks for you valuble commands .....i will try better next time...thanks ones more.

Hi ...Zyx Graphics.....sky from photoshop....that is in post production.
thanx my dear
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Old 12-09-2007   #5
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Default Ok.

OK i get it but if you had to render a sequence with the camera in motion... Is there a way to make the sky look as good directly in the render?
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Old 12-14-2007   #6
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Ok But I Think Your Render May Be Need Some Work Again To Appear More

Real And Your Material For Rood And Side Walk Not Be Real

And At Final Your Model Very Good

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Old 02-15-2008   #7
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OK i get it but if you had to render a sequence with the camera in motion... Is there a way to make the sky look as good directly in the render?
hi dear...i did'nt check that...may i will try that next time
thanx
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Old 02-15-2008   #8
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Ok But I Think Your Render May Be Need Some Work Again To Appear More

Real And Your Material For Rood And Side Walk Not Be Real

And At Final Your Model Very Good

Keepworking
i wiil try next one...thanx for your comments
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