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Old 04-28-2011   #1
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Default Atomhawk - Rise of the angel

I have done this painting for the Atomhawk challenge on .... I didnt win ... but wanted to share with you guys .... hope you like it ... its a movie poster.

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Old 04-29-2011   #2
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I Really like it!!
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Old 04-30-2011   #3
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But here's the things you could improve on (I'm not sayin I could do better, I'm pointing it out as a viewer)
It would've been awesome if the color of the armor wasn't so different from the theme of the environment (Dawn/dusk).
Some random lines on the HUD(a crosshair perhaps) would've been a nice touch.
Lastly the gun could've been in the other hand pointing towards the left corner and possibly shooting.
But then again I'm just pointing out the things that would appeal to me, what may or may not appeal to others is a different matter.
All in all it's a job very well done.
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Old 06-20-2011   #4
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@Baron Flame. not trying to hate here or anything but in my opinion the armor looks good the way it is, with the blue color it really stands out from the background but it is still pleasent to watch because orange-blue is a good combination(if used in the correct way).

And again just stating my opinion I'm not trying to hate here.

Sorry if I miss typed something but I'm not that good at english.
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