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Old 12-21-2008   #21
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Here's an update with a changed camera angle...is it more what you're thinking?

The focal length is modified slightly in the below picture.

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Old 12-21-2008   #22
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Here's an update with a changed camera angle...is it more what you're thinking?
Yes, I like the perspective much more. Now the "wall" looks insurmountable. Maybe you should make the clearance between door frame and door leaf fully visible.
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Old 12-21-2008   #23
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Ok, I think I'm almost in the final stages of the project. I suppose that I can get it done and rendering by the end of the night.

Please critique!

-Funddevi

EDIT: Final update for today, I think I'm almost entirely done with the project
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Old 12-24-2008   #24
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Another render, this time the hands are changed slightly. Is this better or worse than the previous image?

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EDIT: Please don't mind the white and gray on the top and left side of the image.
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Old 12-29-2008   #25
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Okay, here's another update. I've added more contrast to the crib in the hopes to make it pop out more, and also moved the hands a bit more. Which of these images do you like more, the one with the stretched wood texture (top) or with the smeared wood texture (bottom)?





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