Need some help on my Gnomon admission portfolio, pls

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Hi, nice to join you here.

I'm trying to get into the 2-year program 2016 summer term, and working on my portfolio now.

I sent my works to an admission manager, she was so kind and told me that the 2-year program is an option for me.

That's was nice, but I'm not pretty sure about how can I get in. So I need you guys option and help to keep myself moving on too.

This is the link of my portfolio for a current version, the page numbers are not all correctly as it is a WIP job :
http://suyangwang.blogspot.fr/2015/1...o05112105.html

And you can also find my sketchbook if they could be included :
http://suyangwang.blogspot.fr/2015/1...ketchbook.html

Thank you guys, I'll be so glad to gave your opinion and critic.