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Old 02-07-2011   #1
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hey folks,

I want to share with my actually portfolio. Currently I want to work more on my technique to make my style more realism.

http://zulusplitter.de

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Old 02-07-2011   #2
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Lightbulb Hi there!

Hi Tony, thanks for your PM. I'll reply it here instead doing a reply via PM kinda bothering me.

I don't have a personal blog or site, but I'm going to build it someday with my girlfriend. Now we're concentrating each other to our personal matters like finishing her studies and I'm making my graphic novel.

If you are interested with my art, we can share it via msn. And FYI, I'm making a graphic novel or comic like Wormworldsaga style.

It's nice to see your website, so clean. But in my humbly opinion, you have to study anatomy more deeply. Your mechanical units don't seems like having a dynamic movements. That's my first critique, I hope it's not so offense.
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Old 02-08-2011   #3
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Hey HaYaTo,

okay, no problem :-)

Thanks for your critique, I'm more a environment artist. But you say the right, my anatomy isn't the best. I currently work on it
Your critique was very helpful, thanks
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cool work but yeah um study people. i was told along time ago by a tattoo artist is to get some porn to draw. at first i thought crazy but learning how the body looks w/o anything makes drawing them with armor or cloths a lot easier. but there a lot of anatomy books if u look for them that has really great poses.
here a great place to start ur adventure.
http://photoscot.deviantart.com/
i love his work. hope u enjoy
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Old 02-08-2011   #5
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Tony, darkisato was right... if you are an enviro artist, try at least draw one characters like pin up or something with the background this suggestion will make you look after your composition study as well. Balance between character and even your matte paintings.

Good luck, mate.
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cool work but yeah um study people. i was told along time ago by a tattoo artist is to get some porn to draw. at first i thought crazy but learning how the body looks w/o anything makes drawing them with armor or cloths a lot easier. but there a lot of anatomy books if u look for them that has really great poses.
here a great place to start ur adventure.
http://photoscot.deviantart.com/
i love his work. hope u enjoy
Thanks darkisato :-) I will do it. That photog is pretty good to to learn more about anatomy: http://mic-ardant.deviantart.com/gallery/

thanks again
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there a nother site sk something it a site for ref and models stuff. u need anything in art u can find it in 1 if the 3 sites it branches off into.
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Dark, did you mean 3d.sk?
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YEAH! they have sister sites that linked to them for diffrent poses and what not. great do have and if u want to make this line of work ur life it won't hurt to spend some of ur videogame/comic funds to get a membership.
well u can also get some of there models when u buy image FX
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i'm limited with connection, but i like the way the site is organised and it's look and feel...

will check the artwork later
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