wip's For this months 2D contest, Critiques please.

[jayriggo]

These are my wip's for this months challenge. This is my very first contest and only my second, or technically my third since i did a redesign on the composition, digital painting ever. So far all from my head and done with a stock brush in photoshop. Please critique I am grateful for any advice. Thank you in advance.

[jayriggo]

Thanks, its too bad because I was unable to finish because my roommate caught my apartment on fire lol, So I am still trying to get things back together and replace everything that needs to be replaced. I will be in next months contest though.