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Old 07-03-2009   #7
ChrRambow
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I really love your idea ... The idea for the pose is great.

I think you can enhance dynamic if you open the hand of the wolf ... like he is trying to press away the hand with the knife from him
with an open hand.

The whole pose feels like the wolf is in struggle because red riding hood is attacking him.

Another detail that would enhance is the mouth area ... the skin should be much more fletched and stretched away and more gum and teeth visible on the side.

Where she is grabbing him on the nose he is maybe pushing his lips and nosearea painfully back...

More wrinkles running down from the nosebridge to under the chin....

Just some quick ideas.

Keep up the great work ... i really would like to see the final one.
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