My "Stuff"

[JL. Alfaro]

Here are some of my works, some I like most need improving but Im sharing it anyways.


From a CA Tdome challenge
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2846/minamotonoyoshitsunecopmy4.jpg

Girls calendar challenge
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5833/dudecopyvd1.jpg

Same challenge (wip)
http://photos.imageevent.com/aljmary/menalive/attachment.31.jpg

Chow
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/2677/jlalfarochow53tmntpigcouw8.jpg

Monthly challenge "The Tunnel"
http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/4715/freshmeatcopyuq7.jpg

Personal project
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/9026/jaguarcopydd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)




Thanks for looking!:)

-JL

[MackSztaba]

good start. You need to tighten the skin tones on the bodies. Also the tones are reading really muddy right now. You need a stronger light source and some darker shadows. Keep going!:D

That last piece is step in the right direction, just watch the anatomy.